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Post by Yo-chan on May 28, 2005 2:38:21 GMT -5
(Yusuke and a phoenix have so much in common at least in my eyes...sad yet quite beautiful poem expressing a deep symbolism...please let me know what ya think...and again i think you've read this Yus-chan...)
From My Ashes
By Yodai Hiro
On 3.16.05
Her fiery embrace
Wings enfolding me in her saving grace
No pain I feel
For her warmth keeps it away
Even as death drains my will
I know I’ll be okay
With her bird like beak, she smiles
And I’m not scared as I take my last mile
My crimson blood spills my life
As she holds me so I’m not alone
I know what I’ve done on this earth shall suffice
So I can finally journey home
Like this beautiful phoenix by my side
From my ashes I shall one day rise
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Post by Taya-chan on May 28, 2005 11:08:13 GMT -5
You are good at this. *points at ghost poem somewhere on last page of Fanfiction board* I really should stop doing this stuff...
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Post by Konnichiwa on May 28, 2005 12:57:22 GMT -5
Yeah..... ;D ;D ;D Me likies poems.... ....... -.- ^^......
Please try to ignore me... I think I had too much too much sugar today......
Bob: ..... and she has to her SAT's..... Adam: I LAFF AT you!!^^ Kelly:-.-
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Post by Yo-chan on May 28, 2005 22:04:38 GMT -5
(laughs) ok and thanks...
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Post by KuroRyuu on Feb 22, 2006 18:25:27 GMT -5
That's really sad. It's a good poem but it really is sad.
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